Friday, May 14, 2021

My Holiday!

 

  • We were learning about..... How to write a recount. 
  • I found it easy to...... Add a cool background to my title page. 
  • I found it hard to........ I found it just a little hard To Post it to my blog.
  • I enjoyed.....writing a recount of our holiday.
  • Next time I will....... Do a bit more writing on.

2 comments:

  1. I really like your piece of writing😄😄

    maybe don't add so much kapaw stuff

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  2. I really like the way you described about what happen your holiday and having punctuation in your writing to give us more detail about what happen in your holiday.And I like the way you made you words big when you have punctuation.But next time make your words bigger so people can read them properly.And next time add a background to your slides so it does not look plan for your background but every thing else is amazing and keep up with the great work.By Stephanie.

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